采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
People are prone to draw conclusions based on what they heard and what they saw,however,it is unwise. As we know,wrods spread by people always mixed some objective opinions,and scenes seen by people may disturbanced by other factors. It is improtant for us to figure out the truth before make conclusions. Nowadays, informal news spread quickly on the internet, most people make judgement according to little news pieces,other people who don't konw the truth follows,at last, the truth was coverd, society was tricked. How can we make the truth conclusion beside blindly followed? Firstly,we should refer to news as much as possible, it can provide more views for us to judge.Secondly,we should keep fair attitude and do not bring in our own moods.Last but not least,if the conclusion is associated with ourselves, we should verify it until we get the whole evidence. only in this way can help us to avoid make unwise conclusions.
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