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Illustrated from this picture is an ironic scene that a hen, laying an egg, with prideful smile on her face, promise that her egg is qualified, and consist of three parts ----eggshell, egg, folk. Apparently, The caption reminds us that it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty. It is deeply rooted in the mind of general public that lots of businessmen boast their products, in fact, they boast their duty. The reason for this common social phenomenon are easy reach. For one, social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades trend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another, they lack enough plan to face a challenge and as a result ,they can do litter except declare their own duty. When asked about my attitude about the phenomenon. I hold the view that the trades not boast their own duty but ought, via any means, to improve their competitive force. Therefore, I draw my conclusion that the hen of the cartoon shouldn’t boast her egg. All trades ,as the hen parallels, also shouldn’t boast their duty but hard work to provide more benefits for the society.
