作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。
Individuals are prone to draw conclusions based on what they heard and what they saw,however,it is unwise. As we know,wrods spread by people always mixed some objective opinions,and scenes seen by people may disturbed by other factors. It is important for us to figure out the truth before making conclusions. Nowadays, informal news spread quickly on the internet, most people make judgement according to little news pieces,other people who don't know the truth follows,at last, the truth was hidden and the society was tricked. How can we make the true conclusion instead of following? Firstly, we should refer to news as much as possible, it can provide more views for us to judge which is the proper one. Secondly,we should keep fair attitude and do not bring in our own moods.Last but not least,if the conclusion is associated with ourselves, we should verify it until we get the whole evidence. only in this way can we to avoid make unwise conclusions.
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