2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。

Today ,increasingly people shut the door to communicate with others. They prefer to look at their phones when cross the street ,take the bus , have a dinner.However ,overusing phones will do harm to us . In the first place , using phones make you concentrate more on device rather than your face to face person ,which let us be more numb .Also ,it be the barrier to chatting . In the second place , it's harmful for our eyes to play phones more often . If overusing it , your eyes would be impacted . At last but no least , it not only reduce the chance of communiting with oters but also make us do things much slowly ,because you are involved in your games , weibo .When you are addicted to your phones ,you will be lazy and don't to finish task . In conclusion , we ought to use phones correctly . Phones are the tools that can provide us information and what we need , rather than toos that make us be addicted in them .