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Tony,13 years old,Class 4,Grade 1,England,father, teacher,school,mother,
doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。
My name is Tony Miller. Tony is myfirst name,and Miller is my last name.I am 13 years old. I am in class4,grade1.I am in England.My father is middle school teacher. My mather,too.I have three brother,Tine,Dale,Bob,two sister,Cindy,Alice,four cousin and I have grandparents.I like blue. I favorite food is vegetable. This is me.
