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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:08浏览次数:6638
要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

用户的作文(系统评分76.0分
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作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

From the cartoon,we can see that a group of people go sightseeing with a boat and throw away rubbish now and then. The drawing intends to stimulate human reflection on their behavious to the environ-ment. As a part of the earth,to support our lives we have to rely on natural resources.How-ever ,human not only use natural resources unlimitedly,but also produce a series of environmental problems,for instance,greenhouse effection ],white pollution and so on,what might lead to human's extinction. Confronting with such serious issue,it is urgently that we ought to put emphasis on environmental matters.Goverment should take measures immediately.At the same time,strenghten public consciousness regarding to environmental protection.

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