小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；文中有较多拼写错误，用词太过单一；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

i have a good friend, his name is xiaoming. he is one of my best friend. we know when i was 5. i have a good friend, his name is xiaoming. he is one of my best friend. we know when i was 5. i have a good friend, his name is xiaoming. he is one of my best friend. we know when i was 5. i have a good friend, his name is xiaoming. he is one of my best friend. we know when i was 5.