2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Frist wellcome you come,my dear friend.My countryside Shangrao is a small city in the south of China,where is a beautiful peace.In my homedown,there are much famous scenic spots. Sanqing mountain is a of the most fomous scenic spots,it is so attractive that a lot of visvitors come here every years.