2000年1月英语四级作文真题:解决上大学的费用

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

How I Finance My College Education The cost of College Education.There are different ways to solve it.First,you can find a part-time job.So,the hire can pay for a part of your charge.Second,you can lend to bank for your expenses,but after you guarateed,you must return the money and interest. As for me,I think I will choose the first one.Since I want to get to experience in society. It'scan aiso excuse my ablity.