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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3975
要求:
题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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文中从句数量过少;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。

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People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement 2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details 3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

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