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Because of the rapid improvement of economy, it lead to be steady growth of person's living standard. Some people spend amount of money on everything making their life comfortable. As a matter of fact, it is easy to cause one situation like this. More and more people don't think their behavior might waste resources. For example, some children eat a lot food even they aren't hungry. At last, a lot of food will be discard just because human being don't want to cherish.