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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12882
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬,同时能较准确地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly depicted in the picture above, a man is using computer to communicate. Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning of it is thought-provoking. Obviously,the picture revealed the fact that with internet is fast-developing more and more people tend to communication with computer. In my point of view, too much time of using computer with people's life is not as helpful as it is meant to be. First of all, if you allways use computer to communicate, you would be uncomfortable to talk with others face to face. Secondly,it is not denefit to your health. To sum up, too much time of using compute can be too much of a good thing. We should communication both computer and in ture. Only in this way can we enjoy our life.

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