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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33608[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;采用了一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Because of the rapid improvement of economy, it result in be steady growth of person's living standard. Some people spend amount of money on everything making their life comfortable. As a matter of fact, it is easy to cause one situation like this. More and more people don't think their behavior might waste resources. For example, some children eat a lot food even they aren't hungry. At last, a lot of food will be discard just because human being don't want to cherish. When they don't think twice to take advantage of daily necessities. There is not only reason that it's necessary to buy it or not. According to the habit in the past, we can compared with many factors which there is different between two ages of the time. Ancient people always work very hard to support their family to maintain enough food or something. It is rare to buy a lot of things that they don't need. But at present, something change a lot.

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