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单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；请注意分段。
Because of the rapid improvement of economy, it result in be steady growth of person's living standard. Some people spend amount of money on everything making their life comfortable. As a matter of fact, it is easy to cause one situation like this. More and more people don't think their behavior might waste resources. For example, some children eat a lot food even they aren't hungry. At last, a lot of food will be discard just because human being don't want to cherish. When they don't think twice to take advantage of daily necessities. There is not only reason that it's necessary to buy it or not. According to the habit in the past, we can compared with many factors which there is different between two ages of the time. Ancient people always work very hard to support their family to maintain enough food or something. It is rare to buy a lot of things that they don't need. But at present, something change a lot.
