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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11490
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。

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Nowadays, some parents give their children money as award in order to spur their study. As a matter of fact, many students prefer to get money from their parents than just receive some oral praise. However, I believe this way is misguiding method. First of all, giving money for high grade may let them invert the importance of process and result of learning. Human is born with the curiosity of exploring the unknown. It's is knowledge that enrich our life and help us to establish the modern society. Therefore, we learn knowledge to understand the world and better ourselves. However, the test is only a method to measure whether we comprehend the classes and the assignments, and the process of learning is much more important since our goal is to gain knowledge. If parents award their children with money for their grade, children may form a idea that the grade they get is more weighty. As a result, they will focus more on the result than the process which means they are wasting their time on pursuing the high mark without truly learning something that helpful to them.

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