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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；作者应增加从句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。
Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese In last year, we encourage our children to study other languages like english and japanese and so on. We want to our chidlren find a good job by the advantage of language but in the same time we ignore to study chinese. The reasons for this phenomenono are as follows. Frist and foremost, this society is constanly leading by money, we study other languages just want have success.secondly, the school hold the view that the chinese is not as improtant as math and other subjects. last but not least, the students think chinese is extremely simple that need not to hard to learn. The thought is absolutely wrong. Because of the reasons, more and more people convey a conception that chinese is valueless and easy to learn and understand with need not study intensively. As a university students, l am convinced that chinese is valuable and have extensive knowledge and profound scholarship. we should learn the chinese because it is our root with our country.
