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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第45篇:实践学习和阅读学习哪个更好些

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:27浏览次数:11493
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作文题目:

Close observation opens up new worlds in many ways. It can tell us things we would otherwise never know. Most often, we see more when we look and listen. Fortunately, movies give us that option, but is requires diligence. Compare and contrast learning by doing to learning by reading.

In your opinion, which is better? Explain.

近距离观察能够开拓视野。对比和比较实践学习和阅读学习。依你看,哪个更好些?并作出解释。

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用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇表达比较恰当,避免拼写错误。

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As a saying goes, "practice makes perfect". More and more people focus on the practical action rather than learing by reading. But as far as I am concerned, the ideas we learn from books can serve as a guideline, follow which we can adapted to social life much more easily. My main reason is that, we cannot achieve success in the real life without the lead of principles any more that a dancer can make a difference without training. As the accumulation of the the predecesor's experiences, reading is an available way for us to get to know more about the world. Another reason is that, reading offers us a broader view of the society, with which we are seneitive in our dealings with other people, thus we can become a person been liked everywhere. All in all, reading plays an improtant role in our daily life, the maintainace of social relations and the thinking ability of a person, that is to say, we can never ignore the importance of reading.

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