英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 专业八级> 真题> 2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

2006年专八英语作文真题:Ambition

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:01浏览次数:3435
要求:
题目 Ambition
说明 Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer, once said, "We decide what is important and what is trivial in life we decide that what makes us significant is either what we do or what we refuse to do but no matter how indifferent the universe may be to our choices and decisions, these choices and decisions are ours to make. We decide. We choose. And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about do you agree or disagree with him?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

The life is short and time lapses before we realize it. for the instance, how to take use of our lives does matter. And I do agree that forming our destiny is what ambition is about. Individuals seem nothing compared with collections or the society. But we have to keep in mind that we are unique no matter who neglects or contempts us. So living a colorful life with our best effort should not be brushed away at all. as for how to bright our life and fulfill our ambition is another problem to deal with. the first thing above everything is that make and stick to it our principle. on your way to success, you may meet various temptations and obstacles, you should never make compromise to them against your criterions. secondly, making it clear what your ambitions are. only if you know what is of necessity to you and what you have to protect, you can make choices and strive for it. and in the process, in fact, we are making blue plans and practising it for ourlife to form our destiny. everyone has his dream and ambition, the stages to realize it is what life means.

会员评论0个评论)
梁小絮
金币:20

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:85.0catherineweiwei

人气:52发布:2014-03-25

得分:84.5斯比德瑞瑟

人气:87发布:2013-11-05

得分:84.5李晓鹏123

人气:79发布:2014-03-12

得分:83.5songchunyan

人气:104发布:2014-01-21

得分:80.5李晨11

人气:56发布:2016-10-15