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The life is short and time lapses before we realize it. for the instance, how to take use of our lives does matter. And I do agree that forming our destiny is what ambition is about. Individuals seem nothing compared with collections or the society. But we have to keep in mind that we are unique no matter who neglects or contempts us. So living a colorful life with our best effort should not be brushed away at all. as for how to bright our life and fulfill our ambition is another problem to deal with. the first thing above everything is that make and stick to it our principle. on your way to success, you may meet various temptations and obstacles, you should never make compromise to them against your criterions. secondly, making it clear what your ambitions are. only if you know what is of necessity to you and what you have to protect, you can make choices and strive for it. and in the process, in fact, we are making blue plans and practising it for ourlife to form our destiny. everyone has his dream and ambition, the stages to realize it is what life means.
