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Hello， I am Mary. I study in a good school. There are many students learn with me. My school's name is Yuying. It is very big and good. It has built ten years ago. It has two classroom buildings and a big playground. Every classroom is built very big. There are twenty-one boys and twenty girls in our class. I like music class. I think music is very interesting. I like taking part in sports meeting. So I am very good in sport. I always run in the playground everyday. It can make me more healthy.
