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Hello， I am Mary. I study in a good school. There are many students. My school's name is Yuying. It is very big and good. It has built ten years ago. It has two classroom buildings and a big playground. Every classroom is built very big. There are twenty-one boys and twenty girls in our class. I like music class. I think music is very interesting. I like taking part in sports meeting. So I am very good in sport. I run on the playground every morning. It can make me more healthy.
