2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦123:我的学校

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Hello， I am Mary who wants to be your friend . There are many leaners. I study in Yuying middle school . There are many great teachers and big playground . It has built ten years ago. It has two classroom buildings and a big playground. Every classroom is built very beautiful. There are twenty-one boys and twenty girls in our class. I like music lesson. I think music is very interesting. I like taking part in sports meeting. So I do well in sport. I run in the playground every morning. It can make me more healthy.