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Because of the rapid improvement of economy, it leads to steady growth of person's living standard. Some people spend the amount of money on everything making their life be comfortable. As a matter of fact, it is easy to cause a situation like this. More and more people don't think their behavior might waste resources. For examples, some child eat a lot food even they aren't hungry. At last, a lot of food will be discarded just because human being don't intend to cherish. When they don't think twice to take advantage of daily necessities. There is not only reason that it's necessary to buy. According to the research of the past, we can compare with many factors which there is different between two generations. Ancient people always worked very hard to support their family to maintain enough food and clothes. It is rare to buy a lot of things that they don't need. But at present, something change a lot. Saving money isn't common phenomenon nowadays. After all, social progress is growing quickly. it seems to be challenge how to be effective in saving resources around the world.
