2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

A strong will is a promise of succes .a man who want get succes he should has a strong will .face hard nerver give up.in the history the people who did very unbelieve things must has the strong will AS us students we also have the strong will .And we will do not be a useful man if we not study hard.so everyone of us should try our best to do the things we need do .