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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17584
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达丰富灵活,高级词汇使用也较熟练,要注意避免个别拼写错误;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒。

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“The able-bodied man who is so tall must be hardly easy going.” I told to myself when I first meet Mr Liu, my chum now, in the interview of the Graduate Entrance Examnation. My impression on him, however, was totally reversed since we had lived together for around three months. Litter did I know then that his tough exterior harored such an optimistic attitude and an organized habit. To began with, he seems to never be crowning at anything or complaining anybody. On the contrary, sweet laughter always accompany him, always creating a positive atmosphere. Last Monday evening, his BMO logo bicycle was stole. After my comfort, he said with a round of laughter:“Thanks for your care, it is very peaceful in my life and I am appreciating the god for some reasons. First, my bicycle but my life was stole. Second, only bicycle but all properties in my life was stole. Lastly, it’s he but I to steal something.” What a positive man he is! It is due to his optimism spirit that I gain the confidence for my future, both jobs and families. In addition, his life is regular. I am summoned to breakfast at seven o’clock every morning. Of course, we have fall into sleep at eleven o’clock every night, in which other classmates are employing themself to their study. It is a good habit to get up early and sleep early. To sum up, I’ll have a positive mindset resulting from his optimistic attitude, whereas I’ll have a healthy life duo to my regular habit. That’s the reason I admire him and would like to introduce him.

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