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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8491
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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“The able-bodied man who is extremely high must be hardly easy-going.” I told myself when I first meet Mr Liu, my chum now, in the interview of the Graduate Entrance Examnation. My prejudice to him, nevertheless, was totally reversed to admiration since we had lived together for around three months. Litter did I know then that his tough exterior harored such an optimistic attitude and a good habit. To began with, he seems to rarely rail against anyone. On the contrary, sweet laughter always accompany with him, always creating a positive atmosphere. Last Monday evening, his BMO logo bicycle was missing. After my comfort, he said with slight laughter:“I am appreciating the God for some reasons. Firstly, my bicycle rather than my life was took away. Secondly, I just lose a bicycle, a small part in my properties. Lastly, it’s he but I to steal something.”What a rose-colored man he is! Additionally, his daily life is exceedingly regular resulting from his great self-command, which is indeed an essential stimulus for me to imitate. For instance, I am summoned to breakfast at seven o’clock every morning and we have fell asleep at eleven o’clock every night, in which other classmates are employing themselves to their study. To sum up, I’ll have a positive mindset resulting from his optimistic attitude, whereas I’ll have a robust life duo to my regular habit. That’s the reason I admire him and would like to introduce him.

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