2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇使用较丰富，但拼写检查要重视；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

computer and man As the society develops, computer is playing an increasingly important role in our daily life . And too much attention of man is drawn to something about the technology .This phenomenon is account for ample reasons.But the followings might be the most critical. First and formost, the computer has became a necessity of our work and study,especially in life ,it is involved in every aspect .Taking a look around , we can find ample examples with ease.We can buy train tickets by the internet,booking the airpoart tickets online ,learnning English on the Web and so on.Moreover,it is convenient for people to communicate and relax through the internet. However every coin has its two sides.The computer is no exception.Many adults is so indulged in the game that they lose their work ,decreasing communication with friends and family.Students are also the victim of the computer.So people should have a good knowledge of the computer and know how to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits .