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GRE写作Issue模拟题7:the Right of Knowing the Truth

发布时间:2013-07-17 16:43浏览次数:1844
要求:

Task Direction:

You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.

You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.

GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following
consider the complexities and implications of the issue
organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue
support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.

You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.

Section Direction:

Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.

Question: "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."

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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。

用户练习作文:

“The able-bodied man who is extremely high must be hardly easy-going.” I told myself when I first meet Mr Liu, my chum now, in the interview of the Graduate Entrance Examnation. My prejudice to him, nevertheless, was totally reversed to admiration since we had lived together for around three months. Litter did I know then that his tough exterior harbored such an optimistic attitude and a regular habit. To began with, he seems to rarely rail against anyone seeing that sweet laughter always accompany with him. Two months ago, his white BMO bicycle was missing. After my comfort, he said with slight laughter:“I am appreciating my God for some reasons. Firstly, my bicycle rather than my life was took away. Secondly, I just lose a bicycle, a tiny part in my property. Lastly, it’s he but I to be a stealer.”What a rose-colored man he is! Additionally, his daily life is exceedingly regular due to his intense self-command, which is indeed an essential stimulus for me to imitate. For instance, I am summoned to breakfast before seven o’clock every morning, whereas other classmates are enjoyably immersed in their warm bed at the time. Admittedly, both the positive attitude and the self-control are of vital importance to pursue our ideal and value. Further acquainting such admirable friend, in my whole life, is undoubtedly worthy and valuable.

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