GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇使用较丰富。

“The stout man who is extremely high must be hardly easy-going.” I told myself when I first meet Mr Liu, my chum now, in the interview of the Graduate Entrance Examination. My prejudice to him, nevertheless, was totally transformed into admiration since we have lived together for around three months. Litter did I know then that his tough exterior harbored such an optimistic attitude and a regular habit. To began with, he seems to rarely rail against anyone in that sweet laughter always accompany with him. Two months ago, his white BMO bicycle was missing. After my comfort, he said with slight laughter:“I am appreciating my God for some reasons. Firstly, my bicycle, rather than my life, was taken away. Secondly, I just lost a bicycle, a tiny part in my properties. Lastly, it’s he rather than I who is a stealer.” What a rose-colored man he is! Additionally, his daily life is exceedingly regular due to his intense self-command, which is indeed an essential stimulus for me to imitate. I am summoned, for instance, to breakfast before seven o’clock every morning, whereas other classmates are enjoyably immersed in their warm bed at the time. Undeniably, both the positive attitude and the self-control are of vital importance to pursue our ideal and value. Further acquainting such admirable friend, in my whole life, is undoubtedly worthy and valuable.