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Dear foreign mate: I am writing this letter to state my opinion that Students’ Union joints me in welcoming you come to my university. I am sure that it attracts you by the beautiful scenery and harmonious environment. Additionally, this time is both significant and necessary to evaluate the process we study with each other. Since this will be your arrival China for the first time, you may encounter problems in the future or else need help. Any assistance yours may need ours concerning, we will do our best to ensure that your time with our campus is both rewarding and enjoyable. To sum up, we look forward to having you here, my foreign friends. Yours, Li Ming