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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1891
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is necessary for us to say "no" under some circumstances, such like when someone asks us for help, which may make us in trouble. To make things worse, they do only take themselves into consideration, and ignore our emotions. It's time to say "no". Why are some people afraid to say "no"? To my mind, they may too shy to say it, and another condition is that they think highly of other's opinions about them. There are at least two disadvantages when we refuse to say "no". On the one hand, say "yes" with a reluctant emotion is bad for our mood, it may depress us, and put us into an anxious condition. On the other hand, if we are accustomed to say "yes" instead of "no", we will become the person who has no definite views of their own, facing every thing with a compliant attitude. In summary, say "no" is essential for us. We must learn to reject others when they require unreasonable help.

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