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十一期间(National Holiday)，你的同学晓璐邀请你到他家乡做客。你受到了他们一家人的热情款待，并且参观了很多漂亮的名胜古迹。请写一封感谢信给你的同学，主要包括如下内容：
1．感谢同学的热情邀请；
2．对他及家人的热情款待表示感激；
3．表达他家乡的美景给你留下了深刻的印象；
4．再次感谢他们一家人，并真诚地邀请你的同学到你家里做客。
【精析】这是一封威谢信。首先要注意信的格式，而且需将题目要求的四项内容一一列出，内容并不复杂，可以不使用完整的句子。其次要尽量表达出自己的感谢之情。
简单句偏多了；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强高级词汇的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。
Dear xiaolu THANK your parent and you,thank your warm invation.It is my happy time in the National Holiday,i will keep in mind forever.I am moved that your parent is very friendly and funny. It is the most beautiful that i have ever seen.the sence is very warm and comfortable.i like your hometown very much so that i want to stay here forever.it give me a deeply impression.I want to kown can you take me again to you home town as soon as possible?Beacasue I cannot to wait. At last I want to thank again to your warm invation.Beside,I want to invite your to my hometown.I hope you can come . wish you have a good time.
