小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has a big pair of eyes and has a beautiful black hair. Her name is Fang Li. She is my best friend. Her grade is good than me. My friend like dancing,she has been dancing in contest.She is good to me.