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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has a pair big of eyes and has beautiful black hair. Her name is Fang Li. She is my best friend. She got better grades than me. My friend like dancing, she has been dancing in contest. She is good to me. She ofen helps classmates to conduct problems.