正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章用词太过单一,请作者增加词汇丰富度;建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has a pair big of eyes and has beautiful black hair. Her name is Fang Li. She is my best friend. She got better grades than me. My friend like dancing, she has been dancing in contest. She is good to me. She often helps classmates to conduct problems.