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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16944
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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The Interests of My Hometown It's a pleasure for me to show the interesting places to my friend.My hometown which is a small island located in the southeast of China,has a long history and lots of historical sites .In terms of them,first come to my mind is a park called Song Well ,bulit in Song Dynasty for the horses of the war. The Well is built near the beach,however,the water is fresh water and very clear which detected to find it is safe to drink directly. Secondly,there is a tempel at the top of momtains,with a lake regarded as free life pond. The landscapes there are so beautiful that it is a extremely good background for taking photoes.What’s more,you can see all the towns beneath the mountain in that everyone can ease themselves.Finally,I will take my friend to a beach,whose white stand is very soft. Many people swimming in the sea when summer comes.It’s really a activity cannot miss when one comes to my hometown.

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