考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少。

In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated by the bar chart above,we can observe distinctly that the subscription number of the mobile phones in developed countries had a slight increase from 2000 to 2007 and has remained constant since then.Meanwhile,the subscriptions in developing countries have witnessed a dramatic increase,especially from 2004 to 2008. It is no difficult to come up with some possible factors to account for this phenomenon.At the top of the list is the noticeable trend of improvement of the living standards in developing countries.It is reported that it is with the booming economic growth of the these countries that mobile phones have become a life necessity overnight rather than a luxury.Besides,we must admit that developing countries have a far larger population and accordingly a larger demand for mobile services than developed countries.Finally,what is responsible for the situation is that the mobile phone service in developing countries has been increasingly cheaper these years. As discussed in above-mentioned,it is no surprise to see this difference.And I confirmedly believe that this established trend will continue for quite a while in the forthcoming years.