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2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

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要求:
题目 看图作文:旅程之“余”(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160---200 words based on the following drawing
要求
1.Describe the drawing briefly
2.Explain its intended meaning

3.Give your comments

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文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

What is presented here is a rather meaningful drawing. Two visitors are seeing the surrounding scenery of a lake on a small boat, but they are throwing rubbish in the lake. What makes this drawing extraordinary is that a broad range of wastes is floating on the surface of the lake. Which clearly indicates uncivilized behavior in our side. In the recent years, all kinds of media has numerous reports on the phenomenon of tourists' incivilization and missing morality. This situation in the competitions makes it essential to emphasize the moral education. Additionally, the government should implement relative promotion to advocate the green commuting among all the people living in here. Relevant departments should study the specific effects and will produce solutions soon. Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the importance of a healthy ecological environment.

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