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In modern life, people travel a variety of means of transport, people can be based on the advantages and disadvantages of various modes of transport freedom of choice. Bicycles are probably the least environmentally friendly way to travel, riding a bike can also exercise the body, but the shortcomings of this approach is also obvious, is limited to short trips. Travel by car can be long-distance travel, and convenient and comfortable, not affected by the weather, however, spend a long time on the road, travel costs higher. Train travel is probably one of the most popular way to travel, the train can quickly reach the destination, but also save costs, safety, comfort, you can also enjoy the scenery along the way. The aircraft has many advantages: on the one hand, fast, can quickly reach the destination, high mobility, aircraft flying from the mountains, deserts, oceans and other terrain block; the other hand can bring a different experience, To achieve the dream of flying. But the aircraft also has shortcomings, travel costs are too high, and the plane in flight after the accident, passenger safety can not be guaranteed. There are many ways to travel travel, each mode of transport has its own advantages and disadvantages, for their own is the best.
