2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇使用比较灵活。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will What leads one towards the peak of life or career usually shows out as the strong will, the most essential virtue and guarantee for one's success. Actually, only those equipped with strong wills are likely to fullfill missions whose functions are so effective that turns out to get out of common people's expectation. Moreover, the perspective above can be proved useful when it is applied to students, for the one failing to focus on his study can never grows up to be an outstanding people,