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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8991
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
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文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺。

用户练习作文:

We always say that we can not judge a person by thier appearance. I totally agree with it. To my mind, people who think highly of others' appearance are superficial, and they can not be a true friend. What we need to do is judging a person by their hearts. Many instances can be found to support this idea. Such as the head of Alibaba, Ma Yun. To be honest, his appearance isn't belongs to the good-looking in many people's eyes, but he becomes the richest man in China. He has the talent what others deficiency. It is obvious that appearance is not the essential element for us to judge others. As far as I am concerned, only the quality of gift, attitude and a firm will can be used to judge others. In summary, what I want to say is that one can not be judge by their appearance. I am in the side of that only we come into contact with others can we really know them.

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