Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
应增加文中从句的使用;文中高级词汇表达比较恰当,但单词拼写不够认真;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
The picture said that a girl`s Mom and Dad use the computer to write a letter to their daughter.The letter writer that andy`s mother and Dad was fine,and they miss their daughter,they are look forward to seeing their daugher again,and so on. For the picture,we can learn that with the delievep of the internet, a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. We can use the internet to meet some people who was farster from us. When electronic communication replace face-to-face contact. we can`t speet long time to see a people,or use a paper to write a latter.We onily open the computer to write a latte,the others can recieve a latter at sone.