高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少。

My hometown Our hometown was very beautiful in the past time. It was surrounded by green trees. The rivers were very clean and many fishes swam in it. Houses were simple and crude, Street were narrow. People in that days worked hard and lived a poor life. But they felt happy. BUt now everything is changed. Tall buildings stand everywhere. All kinds of vehicle are filled with street. Rapid development Industry lead to bad environment. Trees become less and fish disappear. It is time for us to control pollution.