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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain ）。
（1）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
（2）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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2. 请不要逐字翻译
作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Hello, after visiting our school, we plan to visit the Yellow Mountain. In order to make you learn some information about it. Here, I`d like to tell you something about the Yellow Mountain,which is one of the famous places of interest in China. The Yellow Mountain lies in the south of Anhui province. Every year, It attracts a large number of tourists from different countries. While climbing the mountain, people can enjoy the sea of clouds、wondrous pines、unique rocks、the beautiful sunrise and so on. Of course, we should be very careful during the trip. It will take us about 3 hours to get there, and if you don`t like that ,you can go there by plane or train as well. I believe we will have a pleasant trip.
