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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5942
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

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The accelerated pace of urbanization has turned increasing rural areas into urban ones. Fewer and fewer persons have the experiences of living in a rural areas. For those who have been accustomed to urban life, living in a rural area may be a funny experience. But some persons don`t think living in rural areas is better than living in urban cities. For those who have been entangled by many trivial things in daily life and work, living in rural areas for some time will give them a way to release themselves since there are less people. They can calm themselves and recharge themselves by breathing the fresh air, listening to murmuring creek and enjoying tranquility of a village, which is hard to see in urban cities. While everything has two coins. Living in rural areas has no exception. Scarcity of infrastructure and transportation may cause much inconvenience. There`s no movie theater, no shopping mill, no gym and so forth. For those who have been used to these entertainments will find life in rural areas is boring.They may prefer to live in urban cities than in rural areas. Of course, there is no absolute answer when it comes to the question whether living in rural areas is better than living in urban cities, which varies from people to people. Our choices are determined by comprehensive factors, including our characters, our life experiences, our habits and so many others. In other words,those who prefer to quietness may chose to live in rural areas. While,those who have been obsessive with various entertainments may prefer to live in urban cities.

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