错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,同时注意积累高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
my favorite sport is football.By chance,I pick a football on the road,and than I play it with my friend,from then on,I like the football.I always play the football with my friends,I like running on the grass,I like the speed.When I feel unhappy,I would play football.Football need team work ,you sould trust each other.Football can make you strong.