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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71643
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章衔接手法恰当;拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累。

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One of the most famous monuments in China, The Statue of Hero, was present to our town by the people of Shanghai city. The Statue of Hero, which was designed by the sculptor Snow Lee, took one year to complete. The actual figure was made of copper supported by metal framework which has been constructed by Snow Lee's sister. The Statue was 50meters tall and it has been erected on the biggest square in our city. Someone always ask to how transport it from Shanghai city to this place. First the statue was taken pieces then send to our city, then put the states together again. It has been a symbol of brave for hundreds of people who have visited our city to look for heroes. It has been a famous beauty spot.

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