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One of the most famous monuments in China, The Statue of Hero, was present to our town by the people of Shanghai city. The Statue of Hero, which was designed by the sculptor Snow Lee, took one year to complete. The actual figure was made of copper supported by metal framework which has been constructed by Snow Lee's sister. The Statue was 50meters tall and it has been erected on the biggest square in our city. Someone always ask to how transport it from Shanghai city to this place. First the statue was taken pieces then send to our city, then put the states together again. It has been a symbol of brave for hundreds of people who have visited our city to look for heroes. It has been a famous beauty spot.