小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；文中从句的数量太少；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Hello,My name is bob.I have a good friend named lily.On the one hand,she is very beautiful and smart.On the other hand,she likes English very much.More importantly,she is friendly to me.What's more,she always helps me so that I can make a great progress in the last exam.Last but not the least,I like her during the primary school.All in all,I want to express my thanks to her.