小学二年级英语作文:Our house

作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

my father is tell than my mother ,my brother is shot,This is our house.It's nice and big!It's a warm world. All family are live in it. Ha!This is my parents'room.It's big.My father is sit on the this chair.My mother is sleep on this bed. This is my room.It's big,too.It's name's "Ann park" because it's very lovely and interesting.This is my desk.Everyday I do homework here.This is my bed.It's pink because pink is my favourite color. This is our sitting room.It's tidy.It has a table,four chairs,a TV,a mat and a flower.We often sing songs here and watch TV here. This is our book room.It's big but small than the sitting room.It has many many wonderful books.We are read books and newspapers here. This is our bathroom.It's big.We take baths,wash faces and brush teeth here. Our house!Our warm world!I love U!