语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
Nowdays,more and more people perfer to celebrate the west festival, such as Christmas Day, Valanties Day and so on. So why there are so many people celebrate western festivals? It may comes from the followings: Firstly, with the development of world economy, many people from all over the world like to travel to different coutries and they are like to know the meaning of the countries. They are interested in customs, so sometimes they will spend the western festivals. Secondly, the world are getting more and more closer.So people would like to live like the western countries. The last but not least, the living condition of living is increasing, so people can have more spare time to celebrate the festivals. It's also a good way to have a rest. Then, what is the consequence? From the point of my view, I think it is can bring good things for us, such as let people know more about west. Meanwhile,it may sometimes do some harmful things to our tradition.
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