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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9034
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些过程性词汇偏少。

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When and where,we need to use money.however,money is not can buy everything. Someone thinks that source of happiness by money but other people believes root of all evil by money.in my view,money is important for us.for instance,when we want to eat some foods,we must take money to acquire it.we must use money to buy everythings what we wanted.what’s more,some people’s aim is to make a lot of money.in our society,there have many things what the person can’t do something because no money.So,money is very important for us.Nonetheless,money can’t buy everythings.such as, hanppiness,healthy,happy and so on.Maybe,the wealthy have a lot of money but feeling unhappy.on the other hand,the person have much money but going to dead. All in all,money is very important,we must believe it can’t help us acquire everythings.

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