2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇基础不错，高级词汇表达比较恰当，避免拼写错误；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Nowdays,more and more people realize that they perfer enjoying western festival, such as Christmas Day, Valanties Day and so on.Recently,the phenomenon has been became a neated topic. A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon. Firstly, with the development of world economy,the young men are exposed to the international minds or trends,so they are partly influenced.Secondly,the western festivals have been spread widely,naturally and culturally.Last but not least, living condition of living is improved, people can have more leasure time to celebrate the festivals. It's also a good way to have a rest. Then, it may give rise to our traditional festivals. From the point of my view, I think it is can bring good things for us, such as let people know more about west. Meanwhile,it may sometimes do some harmful things to our tradition.However, it is high time that we should take some actions to the negative effectives.